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Prayer of Forgiveness (Free verse) by Dovina

I forgive You for allowing sickness injustice, earthquakes and cruel people who hurt me as I forgive those who sin against me

Crakyamuni 11-Feb-05/10:51 AM
It's interesting enough to get a 7, but it's without the point of intensity, I think, underlying this beautiful subject. Is it about a (forgive this term) Conversation with God.
I created a more juvenile counterpart to this poem a few ago titled " An intolerable rash brother". I too have my bones to pick with the great "You". So I've canvased the world.
Vote on the poem I mentioned o' mine, comment on it, drain it of extraneous blabbery, pick it asunder, and get back to me. I want and value your opinion.




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