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Lust, and the Sad Soul (Free verse) by woodstock20000

Lust. It seems that all the world's a lust. "Oh, if it were not a mortal sin, to make one's Love a God and worship it." Woe to you, Giovanni. For the body is lost, but the soul even more so. It shudders in its own imortality. For its weekness would last forever. Does it not, as it wanders, to and fro along this God forsaken place? Perhaps.

Prince of Void 7-Feb-05/11:24 AM
your poem is interesting to me ..there is sadness in your poem
i can feel it ..............
i know what's behind these lines .. i know the images cant be words
if it can be ...it will be other side where i think worlds and worlds will be lost there ....




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