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Lust, and the Sad Soul (Free verse) by woodstock20000

Lust. It seems that all the world's a lust. "Oh, if it were not a mortal sin, to make one's Love a God and worship it." Woe to you, Giovanni. For the body is lost, but the soul even more so. It shudders in its own imortality. For its weekness would last forever. Does it not, as it wanders, to and fro along this God forsaken place? Perhaps.

woodstock20000 7-Feb-05/9:54 AM
Thanks. I'm more of a visual artist, and english grammer tends to always have its way with me.

This is actualy the first poem I've ever realy written down. So keep the critiques coming people! I need as much help as I can get.




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