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Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach She does not stir Her resting eyes So beautifully Disguise the lies Her peaceful dream Soothes her mind A flaw in life She cannot find Dawn breaks through Soon she'll wake Another day A piece of cake Here I lie Eyes open wide Can't rest my head For the thoughts inside Toss and turn In sodden sweat My mind churns over I can't forget Fatigue overwhelms I tumble to dreams She is the star Always it seems Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach. CSN

god'swife 28-Aug-02/5:07 PM
On second look these semm like beginnings of sentences. If your still fond of this one maybe you could finish some of these sentences and what you make of it.




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