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Before I met you (Free verse) by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.

Before I met you my life was plain, Before I met you I wasen't insane. Before I met you I didn't think it'd come true, That I could ever meet anyone just like you. Now that I met you my life is great, Now that I met you my life is complete. Now that I met you I'm happy all the time, Now that I met you my soul really shines. I thank god everyday for every minute I spend with you, I know that because of you my dreams will come true. I thank god everyday for you as my friend, I thank god everyday for this great gift he has sent. I thank god everyday for you in my life, I don't know where I'd be if I haden't met you that night. I'm so glad, I know you. I hope you are too. I love you Katelyn, and I know you know it's true, And, I guess all I wanted to say is I'd die for you.

Shuushin 25-Jan-05/5:10 PM
That is pretty damn sweet, I gotta say. Enjoy the emotion, my friend - enjoy the emotion.

couple spellings for you if you like:
"wasen't" s/b "wasn't",
"haden't", "hadn't" - except, as you may know - the misspellings add to the effect of the poem.

Good luck.





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