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My Poison ( Vodka )
(
Free verse
) by
Brittanyy
Clear, Imitation Purity. So Clean, Disarming... Take a Shot, Play the game, Everybodys doing it, Dont be lame, Hug the toilet, Feel the shame, You played with the fire Now you lay in the flame.
Goad
23-Jan-05/10:33 AM
You disgusting parody of a sanctimonious old goat, this pome is nothing but a hard lump pulled at random from your colostomy bag. You gave it a 10 because it reminds you of your bed in the morning.
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