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Disturbed Destiny (Free verse) by misheila

Feelings come over me at night. Lost dreams and desires, I awake. Translation lost in time. To late to recapture.

Dovina 15-Jan-05/2:16 PM
I have experienced this many times. Capturing the dream or the last thought before sleep or the waking thought, is difficult. Translation from sleep thinking into wake thinking is hard, but so worthwhile.
recaptire -> capture
period after desires.




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