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Poemranker I Couldn't stay Away (Ode) by Tara57

(I want to compose a poem and I want you all to rip it apart claw it into small pieces so you may swallow down without choking I have missed your dissatisfied attacks all other poetry websites are kitschy and bland) Welcome me back with your daggered words welcome me back into this dark elitists world My fellow losers, rapists, homophobes, sexists, machiavellian masochists. I come to you bearing spilt wine and ruined rhyme all for you to undermine all for you But don’t think I won't open my mouth don’t think I won’t scream out My steps aren’t wary this time so come on you decide Bring everything you got against my fitted frame I will drink it down possessed in this game

thepinkbunnyofdoom 10-Jan-05/6:27 PM
Wow, looks like you got hit by the harsher side of the ranker.




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