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Both Sided Acrostic (Acrostic) by Bhaskaryya

**I know that isn't really good but it's the hardest thing I ever attempted. It has an acrostic message on both ends.** In life, did I ever seeK Loneliness, which haunts me now like A Ordeal from those chilly nightS? Vivacity of early youth thaT Engulfed once me and yoU Yarns my soul today with the fuR Of wistful wishes and futile dreams. I, Until today remember, how on that fateful day I Kicked aside my hesitation and gave you a calL. As soon as you picked up the receiver and said ‘HellO, Stuttering and stammering I confessed my luV To you. My fate reflected in your voicE. Uttering it in a few unclear words, you winded up my love storY. Reality hit me hard! Though you don’t love me, just know… wherever I may gO In this earth and beyond, I shall forever love yoU. First side: I love you Kasturi Second side: Kasturi, I love you

Shuushin 5-Jan-05/10:31 AM
yes, yarn is plausible and all, just that it still leaves that beat long while the brain has to process it.

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