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Tryst (Limerick) by <~>

Caught in a current, carried Under the moonlight, tarried Washed by the wind Cleansed by our sin Why should I care that you're married?

Christof 28-Aug-02/1:38 AM
Well, I think this stays funny after a couple of readings - it's a kind of gallows humour, becuase you know why it feels all wrong and yet it feels all right. I know the feeling. It often gives me cause to laugh on a long and lonely night. Oh ha ha ha.




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