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"oh"
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fevriere
Under her breathswell, a half-gram of saltwater, a syllable's ache.
Dovina
25-Dec-04/10:20 AM
Half-gram, yeah, that's about tear-sized. Too little to choke a person. Still, how is a tear under her breathswell?
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