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"oh" (Haiku) by fevriere

Under her breathswell, a half-gram of saltwater, a syllable's ache.

Dovina 23-Dec-04/5:08 PM

Wow, that's almost as Boolean as DA's comment, and a twist of what I said. Illigical poems can be either dim or bright, as can logical poems.




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