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Andrew part II (Free verse) by Spindle

You were my world. The thought of you filled the pages of my mind. The sound of your voice healed my soul. From your body I drew warmth and fufillment. You were my world. You changed my world. An innocent girl who had yearned for love ever since she could remember. A girl who knew nothing of love's soothing touch or scalding strike. I opened myself to you with all the restrain of a child's laughter. You changed my world. You took my world. My thoughts that were once focused on the beauties of the world were altogether consumed by worrying. My mind was constantly torturing itself for its wrongdoings, and blaming itself for the wrongs that were done to me. I killed myself for you. You took my world.

Dovina 22-Dec-04/5:23 PM
restrain->restraint
"love's soothing touch AND scalding strike" good line.
It did seem like killing myself the first time he did that. You're right, it's about virginity.




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