poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere.

Bhaskaryya21 Dec 2004

Okay, a bit cheesy but nice work!! Just the rhyme needs a little more work. You start with abcb and end up with aaaa. Anyways, hanks for reading mine. I've posted a new one too. Look at it if you have the chance.