poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Intense Irrational Realities by Venus.

<~>27 Aug 2002

is this one of those, 'i'll show you mine' jobbers? heheheh. seriously, though, you could tighten this by dropping 'child's' in s3--it's unnecessary; maybe say 'cradled in antique gold'
? musings, musings...