poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Into My World by sliver.

Bhaskaryya21 Dec 2004

Renee Blue Eyes!! Dedication your love surely!!

Flowed pretty well towards the end but there was something wrong with the flow initially. Honestly, the 2nd line needs work.

Good work though, I love acrostics. I have many of my own. Hopefully I'd post them soon.