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Tryst (Limerick) by <~>

Caught in a current, carried Under the moonlight, tarried Washed by the wind Cleansed by our sin Why should I care that you're married?

<~> 27-Aug-02/11:07 PM
no, p&k, you got it right, the mixing of elemental forces...didn't know which would prevail--head, loins, heart...




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