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Many Thanks (Free verse) by Dovina

On coming back home From being away I really expected no party Condolences or thanks. Oh maybe a word or two From someone who cared, But rhymes and limericks Coming from everyone? I can’t tell you how humble This all makes me feel How utterly unworthy Your concern is quite nice. I just want to ease your troubled minds And say that in Argentina I did not actually drown in the marina, But write this in a little cantina. Now, the words in your verse May sound to some terse And though I may not understand I know your intension Appreciate invention Will get back to you Soon as I can.

sir_heff 16-Dec-04/9:35 AM
i think "write" in the 2nd to last stanza should be wrote, but then again mabye i'm just reading it from the wrong angle




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