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exercise (Free verse) by JoyLuck

Propel Fitness Water, A bland product packaged in a fancy bottle. I am one of those weekend poets everybody rants about. I download pornography off the internet, while reading my homework. I tried downloading to indie music to feel like I am in the scene. I watch Pimp My Ride. My cell phone has more recent outgoing calls than incoming. My buddy list is filled with people I do not know. My roomate's ex girlfriend tried to come on to me during a ski trip in West Virginia. She slept in my hotel room on the other bed. Random arrangements of letters do not make a picture or a poem.

Dan garcia-Black 15-Dec-04/7:34 AM
If you lose the last line, it does paint a picture.

My roomate's ex girlfriend tried to come on to me during a ski trip in West Virginia. She slept in my hotel room on the other bed.

My cell phone has more recent outgoing calls than incoming. My buddy list is filled with people I do not know.




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