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Love Bruises (Free verse) by Jezabele-In-Hell

The last time we made love You left bruises on my legs For the first time in my life I hate to see them fade For every day that passes by They slowly go away I wish they could stay forever So I would never forget How incredible you felt against me The last time we made love They are a reminder Of how intense love is How incredible sex can be I fear the day when I wake up And my bruises are completely gone I wish my love could fade so easy Then my heart could go on

sir_heff 13-Dec-04/9:25 AM
bruises on the heart fade much more slowly than those of the body. sometimes there never really gone and the slightest touch or a harsh thought can bring your bruises to the surface again




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