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father Worked Nights (Free verse) by poetandknowit

father lived in a factory. he would pound, pound and pound all night long, never stopping, never saying why. Laugh and scream, pound and pound -- no lunch hour, not even a coffee break. Pound and pound, using the cat and mother for his steel.

Swishy24 27-Aug-02/7:33 PM
It sounds like a child wrote it.. oh yea.. you are a child right? You did say that you were 6 didn't you? Well, I must say.. who are you to go around rating every's poems as a 0? When the only poem that I would rate a zero.... IS YOUR'S! If I do say so myself...
your poems are actually kind of funny! Stop writing like a 2 year old and maybe your poems will get better ratings!




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