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Suicide III (Free verse) by disturbedone182

Temptation rises within me My wrists tingle as they bleed I feel no love, I feel no hate If I felt regret, it'd be too late What's the point of going on? Why is ending my pain so wrong? Will they notice? Will they care? Why does my life seem so unfair? How will things be different when I die? How many people will ask, "why?"? Will I really go to hell? Why did no one catch me when I fell? I don't give a shit anymore For my life is just a bore I'll just say my last good-byes Before I go commit suicide Why should I keep from ending of my life Why should I not die tonight? Aim the gun, keep my hands steady I owe the world no fucking apology ...

anagram 27-Aug-02/7:16 PM
OK enough is enough.I couldn't take 'Suicide II' or any future Suicides. You should listen to 'Don't Try Suicide' by Queen,track 2 side 2 'The Game' album and see if the great man can steer you in the right direction.




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