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Comparisons (Free verse) by anagram

Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach She does not stir Her resting eyes So beautifully Disguise the lies Her peaceful dream Soothes her mind A flaw in life She cannot find Dawn breaks through Soon she'll wake Another day A piece of cake Here I lie Eyes open wide Can't rest my head For the thoughts inside Toss and turn In sodden sweat My mind churns over I can't forget Fatigue overwhelms I tumble to dreams She is the star Always it seems Far away My angel sleeps Distantly Out of reach. CSN

anagram 27-Aug-02/6:48 PM
Yeah this was not really a good one to post as it was based on a specific event in my life and the parts that are obvious to me are probably not to others. It was an attempt at irony as the 'angel' concerned worked in an office called 'comparisons'. But don't hold back be brutal if you must I don't look for tit for tat praise.




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