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Meltdown (Free verse) by longships

One million suns, Wreak havoc upon Earth’s soil. Cities fall amidst flames, That send iron and steel to boil. No continent is safe, From the radiating mist. Flowing graceless with the wind, Conquering all that exists. The final meltdown, Brings freedom to our souls. One small mistake, Turning all life cold.

Shardik 13-Nov-04/11:23 PM
I would make "sends" singular




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