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There’s A Voice Deep Inside My Head (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

Deep, deep within my head, Is a voice chatting to me while I’m in bed. I’m listening to the voice The tiny voice inside my head Telling me it is full of dread. The dread inside my head. It’s all a mistake To listen to that voice But I guess I don’t have a choice But deep beneath my skin The voice whispering again To show me what to do, To start fresh, to start anew. To start a new life with a new hope With new people to interlope My head is spinning fast I hope the voice will last Deep, deep within my head.

sliver 10-Nov-04/11:43 PM
If this is what you want do say, that's o.k, But re-write, again and again. Where to begin? In the first stanza, using dread, and then beating it 'till it's dead, No. Buy a Thesourus, find a chorus, and next time... try not to bore us. But KEEP WRITING.




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