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A Child Learns (haiku) (Haiku) by poetryman

Children are conceived with no hatred or racism then teaching begins Bob Shank-2004

zodiac 9-Nov-04/11:48 PM
He means the middle line has eight syllables, rather than the correct seven. Googling "haiku", "children" and "nature", I found a bunch of sites (like this one: www.eliteskills.com/z/24904) full of you spouting about how the Japanese think children are the highest form of nature, and nothing else. So I had the Japanese girl sitting next to me google it in Japanese and got even less. Now shut up. People who say haikus have to be about nature are full of ripe turds anyway.




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