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The Roses (Free verse) by poetryman

The Roses Planting the seeds so easy to do blossoming flowers the reflection of you the roses were young so innocent and free needing constant nourishment for the essence of their beauty rapidly they grew strong and erect an orchestra running wild with no one to direct the soil now tainted chemically infected the roses die daily because they were neglected..... Love a child, especially if it's your own. It's so easy to fertilize a seed, grooming the flower takes compassion and dedication. Bob Shank-Oct.31st, 2004

Dovina 8-Nov-04/7:37 PM
We know it's not about flowers. You're using flowers to say something. The problem is that your message is lost because the words do not flow, the flowers do not show. The idea is good, but the delivery is not.




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