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keep on digging (Free verse) by nentwined

How many levels of hell are knocking on your door? They tell me the steps to eden are just beyond the floor. And all I've got to do is keep on digging keep on digging and this grave will lead me there.

edpeterson 8-Nov-04/3:15 PM
I would cut the "they" from the second line, making the statement imperative.

Did i just read "a list of diggables" ? Do my eyes deceive me?

I dig it. (sorry)





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