Replying to a comment on:

Beyond Love (Free verse) by Dovina

My boredom is exquisite and excessive. His eyes explore me, about to speak. I’m almost afraid he’ll commit that indiscretion, and like before, raise a blip in the boredom.

Dovina 8-Nov-04/11:43 AM
Thank you so much for the help.

New last line: “Raise old memories and young hopes, holding a clue to the hidden flaw and nature’s answer in codes like 07, 09, 16, 31, 41 46.”




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001