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Beyond Love (Free verse) by Dovina

My boredom is exquisite and excessive. His eyes explore me, about to speak. I’m almost afraid he’ll commit that indiscretion, and like before, raise a blip in the boredom.

Dan garcia-Black 8-Nov-04/10:39 AM
I've traded my thesaurus for fifty pounds of fortune cookies. Today's fortune about your poem says (pardon me as I read with my mouth full), "Always have old memories and young hopes." BTW- your lucky lotto numbers are 07, 09, 16, 31, 41 and 46. Here, I'll open one for myself. It says, "Nature always sides with the hidden flaw." This is better than the magic 8 ball! Doncha think?




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