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Beyond Love (Free verse) by Dovina

My boredom is exquisite and excessive. His eyes explore me, about to speak. I’m almost afraid he’ll commit that indiscretion, and like before, raise a blip in the boredom.

Dovina 8-Nov-04/10:04 AM
Perhaps "blip" is too strong. If I had a Thesaurus, I might look for a similar, but less hopeful word. I understand you’ve developed a knack for this and might be able to help.




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