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Fair Dianne (Free verse) by Dovina

Bricks fly, pummeling those she’s marked unkind. Snarling teeth yank at entrails. Look out for Fair Dianne when her hair-trigger snaps.

zodiac 7-Nov-04/12:37 AM
This dog I've seen here likes to run into traffic. It must have been hit about a half-dozen times, is missing a leg, ear, and teeth, etc. I imagine it thinks life is this same steady and unstoppable string of pummellings for everybody. The other dogs, the ones who don't run in traffic, don't say anything - or it doesn't believe them when they do.




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