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Fair Dianne (Free verse) by Dovina

Bricks fly, pummeling those she’s marked unkind. Snarling teeth yank at entrails. Look out for Fair Dianne when her hair-trigger snaps.

Dovina 6-Nov-04/6:32 AM
It takes more than that to snap this trigger. Besides, your queen would prefer a paradelle to a pummeling, whereas I find them about the same.




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