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Fair Dianne (Free verse) by Dovina

Bricks fly, pummeling those she’s marked unkind. Snarling teeth yank at entrails. Look out for Fair Dianne when her hair-trigger snaps.

Dovina 6-Nov-04/6:31 AM
I’ll say it one more time, please listen. It does seem a tad short, but you’d not like the outcome of a longer version.




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