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Fair Dianne (Free verse) by Dovina

Bricks fly, pummeling those she’s marked unkind. Snarling teeth yank at entrails. Look out for Fair Dianne when her hair-trigger snaps.

Dan garcia-Black 5-Nov-04/11:54 PM
I heard someone say this once tonight already but I think it bears repeating. "It seems a tad short. Any chance you might stretch it a bit?"




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