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Fair Dianne
(
Free verse
) by
Dovina
Bricks fly, pummeling those sheâs marked unkind. Snarling teeth yank at entrails. Look out for Fair Dianne when her hair-trigger snaps.
Dan garcia-Black
5-Nov-04/11:54 PM
I heard someone say this once tonight already but I think it bears repeating. "It seems a tad short. Any chance you might stretch it a bit?"
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