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Grandma (Free verse) by Dovina

Senses sharpened to understand pain, fingers burning, hot sand in the joints, she’s learned common things uncommonly well. Not just good works, it’s goodness of heart.

jroday 5-Nov-04/3:44 AM
I'm not an old man yet, but growing older pains really hurts.
thats why young people need to try to take good care of themselfs
while they are young.because if they dont,it will come back to
haunt them one day.




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