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My Poison ( Vodka ) (Free verse) by Brittanyy

Clear, Imitation Purity. So Clean, Disarming... Take a Shot, Play the game, Everybodys doing it, Dont be lame, Hug the toilet, Feel the shame, You played with the fire Now you lay in the flame.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 3-Nov-04/7:00 AM
You don't get 10s because you don't merit 10s. This is a really good poeme, and Brittanyy tried really hard. That's why she gets 10s - she goes that extra mile. You need to try a bit harder - I'm sure you'll get there in the end! -10-




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