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Awesome Heir (Haiku) by Shin-Bojangles

Blades whirl through orc flesh Elven lips tremble with lust Aragorn is sweet

phookthworld 26-Aug-02/11:24 PM
Look, bitch, I don't post poems because I have never written any good ones, but unlike a lot of people, I'm aware of the fact. I like poetry too much to put up the little pieces of shit I wrote once because I don't want people to think that's what I think of poetry, I came on here because a friend mentioned it to me knowing that I like poetry and I thought it would be interesting to see what was being written these days, i was really dissapointed cause it's all real bad. You seem to think you're really intelligent and maybe you are, but being intellingent doesn't mean you have talent, maybe if you didn't write your poetry while fucking this guy you could read your handwriting and it might turn out better, there's nothing on this site but a pack of whiny teeny-boppers and goths, when you do something other than have your boyfriend's cock up your mouth you're probably just some goth mallrat, none of the poems here is even worth commenting on i haven't even voted on them because there's no point. Heh you're from canada i've read some canadian poets who are pretty good but you're not one of them, leonard cohen is cool and margaret atwood's not bad, and that Nolden guy is really good, i remember I read this book of modern canadian poetry not long ago, there was some guy in it called joe blade or something, he was pretty bad, but even he was better than you or any of the other stuff on here




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