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Social Awarness (Free verse) by midnitebeauty101

Kneeling by your grave So many thoughts in my head You were always so brave Now you're nothing but dead After everything they teach None of us were aware You thought help was out of reach When all along it was there You were everyone's friend The star if the show Is there a sign you could send There's so much we don't know But now you're gone There's nothing we can do We just sit here forlorn Remembering you I wish I were mad Maybe then I wouldn't miss you And it really is so sad That teen suicide is such an issue

cuddlytiger17 29-Oct-04/5:21 PM
Sad write.

You spelled "awareness" wrong in your title, and I believe you meant "of" not "if" in the third stanza.




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