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Alone (Free verse) by rrashi

When I was sitting alone in the garden, The cool breeze made me feel pardon, The smell was filled with perfume, And the smoke caused by fumes, Made me feel happy and rejoiced, The humming of bees on flowers, Made me feel one with the nature, But after sometime when I opened my eyes, I realised that the breeze had changed into rain, And the water had begun to drain, The smell of wet sand , Made me feel light and joyful, This happened when I was sitting alone, This happened when I was enjoying a cone.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 27-Oct-04/3:15 AM
Astonishing use of "fumes" to rhyme with "perfume".




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