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Yesterday I cried (Free verse) by 1Sapphire1

Yesterday I cried & on the day before also. I wore sunglasses on one of the darkest days in Colorado but I couldn't hide the tears streaming down my face as I walked among strangers. Your memorial shall remain in the hearts that you have touched rather than near the vehicle that blossoms in your name among cranes & columbines. If your children still want to enter this fierce world, they will have to find another way. The hands of cowards have placed you into the presence of God. Go now & spread your wings. See splendid sights that are beyond the realm of humankind. Make miracles happen. For now I will continue to cry. Not for you but for me because I can never meet you; the actress, the sister, the daughter.... perhaps as the angel?

Bachus 26-Aug-02/3:52 PM
Now god's wife, ye know us bachians can fell that tree with one whack.what's this about editing, nay! only typos never structure! who? us? chew on your ankle, this piece suffers from tacky adjective syndrome, and unfunctionable noun disease, i say unfortunately, it is beyond medical-literal-visual recovery, and should be put down 4/10!




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