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A Man Who Cares (Free verse) by Dovina

Chain in the tank broken today Porcelain bowl clean and bright Shirt sleeve wet in the Hill Street Cafe

Dan garcia-Black 26-Oct-04/7:34 AM
Great storytelling. Has the chain been fixed yet?




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