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Shattered (Haiku) by Aetius

Sharp-edged glass fragments: There are things one should not touch ... Like broken friendships.

eliastemplar 14-Oct-04/2:43 AM
Excellent, but I don't think punctuation improves on haikus. Meaningful and thought provoking, friends are such rare and fragile things.




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