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!!! (Free verse) by Jezabele-In-Hell

Every time I think of you A tear rolls down my cheek When I think of what could have been A tear rolls down my cheek When I go to sleep at night A tear rolls down my cheek I cannot get you out of my head For I believe you are my true love And knowing it will never be sends A tear rolling down my cheek

BleedingRose 13-Oct-04/9:52 PM
The style of this poem is such that I enjoy reading and often write myself. I vote 9 not because it is imperfect in structure, which I believe only adds to it's effect and value, but because I would not dare give it the extremest approval untill I have seen more of your works and had a chance to compare thier worth. Furthermore, knowing you personally as I do, I am left curious and somewhat hopefull of the discovery of the one you speak of.




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