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Our lord and saviour, the land of 60 million micks, as wonderful and noble as the pink empire. (Limerick) by ==Doylum

..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you fucking two versed parrot...ha! All rise for the stars and stripes Deploy the missiles We gon get us su varmint God bless A-merica Y'all join with me God bless A-merica

god'swife 25-Aug-02/9:24 PM
Doylum I recieved your comment, and sent you a reply. I saw them both in the comments page and now they've disappeared. Anyway thank you for replying and if you could point out which common phrases, besides thick as thieves, I used in the poem. I try to be as unique as possible but after so many thousands of years of story-telling in human culture it's not so simple. If you have the time please let me know. Also I noticed it's even difficult for the humorist onboard to write without using well worn phrasiology, espacially of the piratey kind. Studied Persona? What happens if they find you actingreal, or I guess I should say not acting at all. Don't worry I won't tell.




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