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Our lord and saviour, the land of 60 million micks, as wonderful and noble as the pink empire. (Limerick) by ==Doylum

..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you fucking two versed parrot...ha! All rise for the stars and stripes Deploy the missiles We gon get us su varmint God bless A-merica Y'all join with me God bless A-merica

<~> 25-Aug-02/9:01 PM
ah, D. what can i say? the sentiment is genuine, and I can't help but join you in hoping my country gets a much-needed blessing or two. this little ditty, however, shows little craft. p&k seems to think you might be baiting me, calling this diatribe a limerick. while there is a cetain element of humor present, it doesn't please like a limerick is liable to. save your rants for the comment box. give us more HIGH ART when you submit a poem. when i read this, i feel so...unsatisfied.




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