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Screws (Other) by helenwales

Dark and unending, Pressing into me your ice cold, Deeper than my own want, Deeper than logic, Opened now the skies above me dance and shiver, Lath and plaster against the tide.

helenwales 23-Sep-04/3:43 PM
Grammer has never been my strongest point - even though I'm an editor by trade! Interesting point about the Morrissey song. I am a fan but not about that one.




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