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Stirrings (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom

A welling-up from deep within, My soul, Something that I do not understand, Not a thought, Nor even a feeling, Perhaps a force, On the verge of penetration, At the very brink of knowing, In hot pursuit of an open door, An open space, Within my soul, A moment of grace...... a gift, An invitation...... an opportunity, To surrender myself, To something, Much greater..... much more profound, Than that which I have ever imagined, Or known before.

redneck_woman3322 17-Sep-04/2:16 PM
This poem is great...I am always "soul searching"...well written I think....




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