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Life On Earth (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom

Life (Freeform) by The Unknown Poet Born without choice, We are thrust into life, Struggling to stay alive, Knowing that we must die, Searching for a God, Who can never be found, Our souls cry out for deliverance, For a way to escape, The terrible realization, That there is no way out!

god'swife 25-Aug-02/2:02 PM
I apologize for being rude. i'm embarrased by that first comment I left a few days ago. The point I was trying to make is it's better to use allegory if you want an emoitional response from your audience.




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