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Flight of the Samurai (Act II) (Free verse) by Shin-Bojangles

Dum dum... Muscled legs stand resolutely on the earth. VERY firm thighs, toned by honor. Ensconced in the sweetest silk of foreign seas, His are the most awesome of pants, He is a Samurai. Gentle winds of dead ninja and satisfied women toss the ebon soldiers of his scalp. And he dosn't even WASH it that much. His hair makes you want to cream, He is a Samurai. ... He fles back to the club; dances. This chick there SAYS the boy is His, But He knows it is not sweet enough. He uses protection, unfalteringly, He is a Samurai.

razorgrin 25-Aug-02/11:04 AM
As I said before, my comments were made in a joking fashion. over your head they went. I imagine you generallly lack a sense of humour, except when you and your "posse" are out raping joggers. Bojangles is not a Samurai. What are you, in junior high?! "heh, heh, they're doin' it." As for the half-assed insults 1."bitch" and 2."cunt" : 1. guilty as charged and 2.yeah, I've got one of those. As for the "stupid" one, The fact that I don't feel the need to make utterly moronic speculations about the relationships of others, using sad attempts at obscenity for punctuation shows that I am a fair bit more intelligent than yourself. Grow up, write something, maybe leave the trailer park more..




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